Over the past decade, I have formulated my philosophy of life. I have benefited greatly from the process, and I hope that you will benefit from reading the document.

 

A brief summary and link to the full 14-page document may be found here:

 

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I am posting here in order to solicit feedback so that the document may be improved. I look forward to a constructive discussion.

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IOW, if you want to discuss some concepts, post them here. However, this is not an editing service.

 

Why not discus each chapter; Post the title and a brief summery, you won't get it edited but you may get a few ideas.

Here's my feedback:

I think you are a spammer.

My philosophy is to reflect absence - meaning that a forest in Russia needs to become the Democratic and Republican Party, the character of Shelly in The Crow needs to become the people of Dublin, and that Studio 54 needs to become the history of France.

Edited June 21, 20169 yr by marieltrokan

My philosophy is to reflect absence - meaning that the EW review of the Penny Dreadful finale needs to become a female that existed in the times of the Roman or Spartan age, or that the London street Marylebone needs to become the presidency of Gerald Ford, or that the 1400's need to become synonymous with the American people, or that the character of Shelly in The Crow needs to become the residents of the city of Dublin.

 

Studio 54 needs to become the Middle East, and a query to a literary agent needs to become the identity of Jesus Christ.

What utter bollocks. Are you trying to show us what a random stream of consciousness looks. I think we've seen enough examples from you.

Edited June 21, 20169 yr by StringJunky

My philosophy is to reflect absence -

 

... of a human author, it seems. Your lists make you look bot-like. What you think sounds clever looks randomized strictly for artificial dissonance. I say artificial because it gets old quickly, instead of being intriguing the way it would if there was a real thread of reasoning to follow.