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  1. Beginning of the first chapter.



    I have the entire story outlined from beginning to finish, I know what I want out of the book. This will be written within months and published within a year (I assume) with 100,000 words being the average length I am aiming for. I have the means to get it published luckily due to a family friend.



    Tell me what you guys think smile.png



    However I'm writing it for myself now, didn't go too well trying to get everyone in on it as a fundraiser for the site. This is probably all I will post from the book until it is written but after I get it published I'll send it to anyone on the forum free. I have my baby and soon to be wife to take care of. I really think this book is gonna be awesome though! If it wasn't for my family though, I would for sure do a fundraiser. However all the ideas/work are mine and gotta take care of the family. I will mention this forum at the end of the book though, maybe do a "about the other" page or something.



    Homosapien, success story of the current top prioritized experiment. None have come this far this fast. Falling in the necessary incremental time and technological range. Others either came up short or failed from their psychology not being able to cope with their technology, resulting in total wars and complete resource degradation. Some couldn't meet standards in their evolutionary history to meet criteria fundamental for the experiment to go as planned. Yes, the Homosapien is promising. Once this experiment is finished, cosmological procreation as a whole can begin. The last step is in progress, everything is meeting up to standard. This is the Concile's perception. The Concile is a highly advanced species relatively to all others in intelligence, evolutionary adaptions, and technology. Eons old, they are far different from any other species in the universe. No need for planets, the ability to sustain life onboard vessels while harvesting resources from space is far from alien to them. It is what the Concile has adapted to do. Breeding through artificial insemination and harvesting the fertilized egg in a birth chamber, has pressured this particular species to evolve into an A-sexual one. This is because they wanted to do away with sex and the emotions that come with it. Attachment, jelousy, anger, pleasure, all hindrances when the not-so-life-friendly vacuum empty void of space is looking your species in the face. At-least that is how they saw it. To survive in space the Concile wanted every valuable bit of time they had, along with every resource. To conserve they would continuously use less and less light, food, air, everything. Relatively long periods of time in dim-light and thin air transgressed into evolving huge eyes that can function with little light, huge lungs that can make use of a thin air. Now an individual with these lungs would literally drown in earths thick atmosphere, like a human under water. Eating is something of the past, they now inject nutrients into themselves. Mastering the science of a nutritional intake, it only has to be done once in a lifespan. This was originally done because they considered taste an unnecessary sense that should be done away with. Researching their brains and brainwaves and infusing a biotechnology implant into the spine after birth yields the Consile the ability to telepathically communicate. They no longer have the needs for a mouth, thus they don't have one. Nor ears, much of the senses essential for survival that most species have, the Concile does not. Now their is no individual mind, all one consciousness after adapting to their telepathic cyborg communication. The Concile, compared to a human doesn't have recreational activity nor want any. They live for research, the unknown is what peaks their interest. Making discoveries, what the Concile perceives as "fun" is far different. Fear, anger, anxiety, etc, are not felt by the Concile. A steady unchanging calm demeanor is the best way a human could perceive their psyche. Concile individuals do not age after maturing. They have eliminated the gene to cause cells to cease replication. Although they can and do die, after a certain increment of time an individual is sentenced to death to reduce overpopulation. This is embraced, the body dies but the Concile does not. The individual consciousness non existent, nothing is lost. Adaptations to environmental pressures, that is evolution. These are the major pressures that have evolved a once average planetary species into, the Concile.



    Just know their will be lots of sci-fi (the Concile anatomy is only scratching the surface), Lots of conspiracy, Lots of action, and lots of twists and turns leaving you wondering how you should feel about it.



    Let me know if this interests you and i'll send you the book for free once its finished and published.


  2. Thank you all very much, I can use my grandpas testers to regularly check my sugar levels and if I see large irregularities then I will try and go to a clinic or something. Again, thank you all very much!

  3. I am pretty young, however I was obese as a child. I weighed over 200 pounds in the fifth grade, I was really obese from the third to 10th grade. Now i'm just kind of chubby and nineteen years old. Growing up my diet consisted of 3 packs of ramen noodles at a time, huge plates of sandwiches, two double whoppers from burger king, lots of candy, and soda. I was an alcoholic for about two years and I know their is lots of sugar in alcohol. Recently I have felt lots of numbness in the tips of my fingers, however that lasted for about two weeks then went away. My sleeping pattern has been really weird and even when I get lots of sleep, i'm incredibly tired sometimes. If I eat a big meal, I can easily fall asleep (not like usual itis this is something way stronger.) I feel like I've been having mood swings, my grandpa has type 2 and is really moody when his sugar is low or high. If i don't eat for awhile, i'm easily irritable. This is not like me at all, I am very hard to agitate, can usually get over it quickly, and have always had a calm demeanor. I have also noticed symptoms like blurred vision after eating unhealthy.

     

    Diabetes is the only rational conclusion I can come to and I can't afford a couple hundred dollar doctors bill at the moment.

     

    I'm almost positive I have it and if I don't have clinical type 2 diabetes, my insulin levels aren't far from it. I could be wrong, I'm not a doctor and I know this is a forum. However I'm not too worried about diagnosis, just asking for any tips on avoiding diabetes.

     

    So far I plan on eating 6 small meals a day roughly 3-4 hours apart including fruits, veggies, and lean meats. Getting on a better sleeping pattern with atleast 6-8 hours. Start exercising again, and get some sunlight everyday.

  4. So I'm pretty sure I have diabetes. I have had many symptoms and if I don't have diabetes I know I'm in the early stages of it.

     

    What can I do to prevent type 2 from getting worse or even cure it?

     

    I have no health insurance and don't want to see a doctor.

     

    What can fasting or a 6 course diet plan do for me? Any other advice?

  5. Might not be credible right now to want to bring the 3d printer to the consumer household but, imagine the possibilities. We wouldn't even need China, or atleast as much as we do now.

     

    I have a few questions about 3d printing. I have heard that you can make lethal guns with a 3d printer, is this really possible? How would this hinder it making to the consumer household. What exactly does it take to build a 3d printer and what does it make things with, just silicon?

  6. What do you mean by convey beliefs?

     

    I have to disagree with the theist thing. I think that religion is actually derived majorly and mostly from fear. Fear is an emotion, arguably the first that we have evolved for survival. How could fear cause people to be theists you might ask? Well, the fear of death for one. We fear death so we can live and procreate. The thought of existence ceasing and fear of the unknown in my opinion is why or the major reason we have theism. The psychological reassurance of eternal life and certainty of reason for life, the solution through theism.

  7. I agree Caleb, It would seem that racism is derived from humanities fear of something different. Other tribes is a good way to put it. Primates go to battle over competition of resources/land/ etc. At some point in our evolutionary history i'm sure that recognizing something like our own species that at the same time looks different was a major threat. Probably a competing group of Australopithecus all the way up to Homo-sapiens was more threatening than the occasional predatory animal. This can't be the entire reason, or everyone would be racist but i'm sure this has a majority of the cause.

  8. You could go as far as to say that culture is part of evolution. I would, even culture "evolves."

     

    Honestly I would say everything that we do is based off evolution or derived from the building blocks that homo sapiens stand on.

     

    Yes I know that the celebrity thing was just an example but, the threads up and I like it so what else is their to discuss? How about the looking glass self or consciousness involving how others/peers perceive us. Racism. Riots. Why is it that hearing someone else laugh can make something funnier? Why do we smile? Why do we cry? Why do people commit murder? Why do we have things like foreign aid and the peace corps? Why is teen bullying a talked about problem in this country or do people slander others period? Why does religion exist?

     

    I have my own thoughts for all of these but i'd love to see which ones you guys think are interesting and would like to talk about.

  9. Well what other reasons are their in particular to talk about? I'm sure that celebrity idolization has a lot to do with the fact that most primates have a pecking order or different level of ascerted dominance. Which evolved into groups of homosapiens having leaders, which is what has transended into celbrities being idolized. Culture also has much to do with it. Idolization varies in different degrees of separate cultures, even much changes in 1 generation in our culture.

  10. From what I understand and this is just Wikipedia and Through the wormhole with morgan freeman, We know it exists due to the experiments with the Hadron collider. Although weve only barley detected its presence and when we try to put it into an equation its mass comes out distorted, the equation isn't equal. This is from what I understand though and I may be giving some misleading or misinterpreted information.

  11. So I was talking to some guy today who apparently has a bachelors in physics and he said about 2 months ago it was announced that the higgs equation has been better figured out, that the mass comes out correctly now in the equation. Is this true? I can't find any info on it in any search engine.

  12. So i'm wondering, if the earth had formed without the presence of the sun. Would it have already cooled down by now or would it still be mostly molten rock like it is now?



    Found this - http://phys.org/news62952904.html

     

    So the sun has little role to play in the earths temperature, is this mostly because of the radioactivity heat or just the time it will take for the amount of molten material to cool down? or something else?

  13. The beginning of the epilogue -

     

     

    Time is an "illusion." A year to Earth is different than a year to Neptune, no year is the same for any planet. They all revolve at different rates around the sun.
    As with days, no planets spin the same speed. Time as you and I percieve is relative. Relative to your surroundings, to your perceptions. You perceptions however
    can be deceiving. We are one out of 8 planets in our solar system. One solar system out of more than billions in our galaxy. One galaxy out of more than a countable
    number of galaxies in the known universe. Many humans believe we are the only living things in the world and the smartest. This as with time is an "illusion."
    You see humans are somewhat of a science experiment. Created and isolated for the soul purpose of finding out how fast a species can evolve. From the sun to the
    asteroid belt to the moon, our life has been influenced from the start. The ones conducting this experiment are the universes longest living species, the Anunaki.
    A species so evolved that for one of them to be on this planet would be like putting a human under water. Their lungs are so used to breathing in a thin air that our
    thick atmoshpere would literally suffocate their lungs. Their eyes and skin would literally cook from the sun exposure from just 3 seconds on our planet. The Anunaki
    have bread for so long in test tubes using genetic engineering that they are A-sexual. No men and no women, all the sex. Their eyes are huge, capable of seeing with
    almost no light. Life is not easy on a space ship, especially for a species that is capable of long distanct space travel. Adapting to life on a vessel has made
    this particular species very different from us. No recreational activites. They live for science, knowledge and understanding the world is what strives them to keep
    going. Not the fear of death. Death is mandatory for the anunaki, after 15,000 earth years. It stops overpopulation. Genetic engineering has whiped out the possibility
    of death from old age. They don't eat, only inject themselves with concentrated nutrients.
    (sorry I wrote this on notepad and spent about 10 minutes on it XD)
  14. Well they are more primitive. The emotions of fear and anger are more necessary for survival when it comes to an Australopithecus compared to a Homosapien.

    I'm sure that a human is a little more curious and a little more likely to observe and ponder the unknown, while a more primitive primate would flee.

     

    Thankyou for asking Zapatos and please ask me to elucidate any further upon this as I have thought much about it.

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