Hello, my name is John Dailey, and I had taken Earth Science classes at the University of South Dakota in Vermillion. At that time, what I had learned in those classes had inspired me to create an alternate Earth, with geographic and geological features different from Earth's but still inspired by them. The problem I have is that I know only the Cause--i.e. the changing of the geography--and not the Effect (how the changes in geography influence landscape, climate and weather). I have the whole description written down, but before I show you the description, if it is not too much trouble, would you be willing to help me with feedback and advice on the changes I had made? Thank you for your time.
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Posted 20 March 2017 - 11:46 PM
At that time, what I had learned in those classes had inspired me to create an alternate Earth, with geographic and geological features different from Earth's but still inspired by them.
So we can know which kind of help to offer, do you think this is a real world, or is it a story you're writing?
"You knew the job was dangerous when you took it, Fred!" -- Super Chicken
God does have to keep the miracles going, or no one would believe that He is real.
Posted 21 March 2017 - 01:22 AM
It's a blueprint to some stories I'm thinking about writing.
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