The Attraction Distraction

 

If the proton is the face of time

then the electron is surley the pendulum

craked like a whip clean accoss to the other side

of the present time

dialation

 

Edited March 25, 201114 yr by 36grit

Is that a haiku?

way too many syllables

still poetry though

Is that a haiku?

way too many syllables

still poetry though

 

 

Na, I don't like haikus. To many rules. My model of the universe is realized as inner visions. It's just easier for me to explain visions with poetry sometimes, than with math and lengthy explanations. I'm not a scientist, but modeling the universe and it's inner workings is one of my hobbies. I gather bits and pieces of infomation and expand them into all kinds of wild ideas.

I have to admit, I really like my latest model of the universe.

Na, I don't like haikus. To many rules. My model of the universe is realized as inner visions. It's just easier for me to explain visions with poetry sometimes, than with math and lengthy explanations. I'm not a scientist, but modeling the universe and it's inner workings is one of my hobbies. I gather bits and pieces of infomation and expand them into all kinds of wild ideas.

I have to admit, I really like my latest model of the universe.

 

the rules are a challenge

like rhyming but with meter

form transcends content

 

needless to say, I find the poetic phrasing of discussion distracting. I will bracket my distaste to appreciate your poetry though, if you like. If you want critique, I don't understand how the protons are "the face of time" though the electrons being the pendulum makes more sense to me.